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I enjoy reading historicals and I adore writing them.  But to me history is mood and it's part of the world I create for each book.  I can alter events, rearrange them or create them out of whole cloth.  In my books everything exists to advance the story so that it follows my muse's twisted inclinations. It'll be a winding road, but it will end happily, every time.  To get there I may create language, events or people that bear no relation to the history we learned in school.  Ultimately, in a QA tale, everything exists to serve the romance and that includes history.  That irritates the heck out of some folks, but I believe there are books enough to cater to every taste. 

Regardless of my history as mood philosophy, my historicals still far outsell my contemporaries.  In fact, overall in the romance world everywhere - historicals tend to far outsell contemporaries.  And that bothers me.  It bothers me a lot.  There are some great contemporary writers and some fabulous stories set in our very own era.  I like to think that some of those fabulous contemporaries, a couple of them to date, are mine.  And just like my historicals - my "now" is apt to look and feel a lot different because from over the top, everything looks better. 

I wish we could give contemporaries their own month.  Better yet, why not give them their own season.  Yes, I think Spring should be the era of now.

As we anticipate the "Spring Into A Contemporary" movement, we're sprucing up our contemporaries with brand new titles.  To be more accurate - we're adding a subtitle.  The change has already been made to one book - Griffin's is now - Dangerous Relations:  Griffin's Law.   We'll be changing the other one - now titled The Billionaire's E-mail Seduction -- shortly.  The covers of both books will catch up soon too. 

Why the change?  It came about because we were tinkering with the title of my WIP, which is - you guessed it - a contemporary.  I'd been calling it "The Office Ink" or "The Office Ink Spells Murder".  But while the book centers around a murder - it's mostly a romance.  This murder occurs at a family law firm.  After my dearest hubby suggested the subtitle, I realized that not only does it suit "Office Ink," it also suits all my contemporaries. 

My contemporaries are all focused on what happens when love intersects with the law.  Dangerous Relations describes events for the lovers and events surrounding the lovers.  It's a great "hook" for all of the books and we hope the "hook" reels in more readers to check out how now looks from over the top. 

We haven't settled on a firm title for E-mail yet.  Adding the subtitle to the front of E-mail would produce a title of unwieldy length.  It's current title is already a little wordy.  I'm thinking of "Dangerous Relations: Tempting The Billionaire" or "Dangerous Relations:  Seducing The Billionaire"  or "Dangerous Relations:  Enticing The Billionaire." But that title is still up in the air. 

I do hope that more readers will make it a point to pick up a contemporary - particularly one of mine!  It'll remind all of us that all the excitement, spark and sizzle of love didn't end with the Regency era.  Love is as timeless and eternal as forever. We may live in "now" rather than "then," but we still deserve a happy ending - and some quacking good fun reaching it. 

Join us at QA Romances this year and SPRING INTO A CONTEMPORARY!!!

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This is a brief post to give a big ole' 5 out of 5 quacks to Neil Simon's "Death By Murder." It's available for your Kindle Fire through Amazon Prime and I heartily reccommend it.

If you've ever been a fan of detective stories or murder mysteries it's a must see. The film is a comedy wrapped in a mystery wrapped in a comedy. The plot revolves around an eccentric's invitation to the top 5 detectives in the world. The recluse invites the best in the biz to his creepy old mansion to solve a murder that's about to be committed - if they don't all kill each other first.

The cast is first rate. I have to give mad props to the late Peter Falk's work, but David Niven was good and Truman Capote was exceptional. Nancy Walker was even in this one and - as always - was fabulous. This work is Simon at his finest which is mighty, mighty fine indeed.

The ending will have every mystery fan screaming, "Yes, Yes. That's true. That's absolutely true." And just when you think it's solved - perhaps it's not, not quite.

This one is a must see and you will love it. That's a guarantee.

Of course, this is the Crazy Duck Lady's opinion and everyone knows - I'm quackers.

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Someone named Cale McCaskey who "writes a bit" and says that sci-fi is really his thing, has published an amazingly idiotic critique of the best-selling literary genre - ROMANCE.  My guess is that I could write any sort of irate, eloquent defense and make no impression a'tall upon Mr. McCaskey.  Instead of crawling on a soap-box, I've pulled out a parody pen.  LET'S APPLY THE MCCASKEY LOGIC TO HIS FAVORITE GENRE - SCIENCE FICTION. 

Sci-Fi novels sell inexplicably well. The fact that we have an illiteracy rate of almost 50% might be partly to blame for the popularity of science fiction. Many people don't have the ability to read books written at a level any higher than children's books or science fiction novels. Regardless, sci-fi sells so well that there are more and more articles and interviews with science fiction writers where they are put on pedestals and treated as though they belong in the select company of writers of much higher standing - like romance novelists.

What readers need to understand is that science fiction novels - by their very nature - are meant to be inferior. Surely, no ivy league colleges will ever teach science fiction novels as part of the curriculum. No science fiction novel will ever be thought of as a classic alongside Spencer, Dickens, Quinn, Lindsey, Garwood or Woodiwiss. If a science fiction tale were that good, it would simply be known as drama or literary fiction or a classic horror tale. No one would ever call Well's "The Time Machine" or Bradbury's "Farenheit 451" science fiction novels. They would be referred to as classic scientific fiction.

The very thing that separates classic scientific fiction from sci-fi novels is that sci-fi novels must by default be bad, tacky even or they'll no longer be classified as sci-fi and will get placed in a higher category.

It's difficult to respect something deliberately meant to be a lessor work. One should always do great work. If a writer classifies his own book as science fiction, that tells me that even he doesn't think much of it. If that's the case, readers shouldn't think much of it either.

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The logic makes as much sense when applied to science fiction as it does when applied to romance now, doesn't it?  That is to say - it makes less sense than I do at 6 a.m. before my morning coffee.  Truthfully, science fiction is a fine genre with some amazing work and there are writers out there putting out some steller stuff.  Yes, some of it may even be taught in colleges one day - right down the hall from courses on romance.

Wait - courses on romance have been taught in some amazing colleges, haven't they?  And Eloisa James, a graduate of Harvard, Yale and Oxford is a Shakespeare professor at Fordham University.  Oh, yes, and she's written many New York Times bestselling ROMANCE NOVELS.  (But don't tell Mr. McCaskey.  The strain of wrapping his brain around that information would probably be too much for him.)

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I love romance. I love reading it and I adore writing it. None of that means that I can't bust a gut laughing at it.

The video below has lust, love, lust, more lust - and a heroine who really understands the meaning of multi-tasking. ENJOY - I KNOW I DID!

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My brand new marvy Maytag stove inspired this post. 

The stove is stainless steel with a black ceramic surface, convection cooking, a hidden lower cooking element and a steam clean option.  It was born and bred right here in the USA.  It replaces a stove that was new in 1986 when our house was built.  We got our old stove with the house when we bought it in 1993.  It was a coil eye stove and the thing was so old that we couldn't find any eyes that fit properly to replace one that died.  My hubby had reinstalled the upper heating element in the oven a couple of times.  We had more stains than you could count on the lower heating element.  Cleaning meant "Easy Off" fumes and lots of elbow grease. 

The new stove is beautiful and it's expecting a little Maytag friend soon - a stainless dishwasher that should be delivered in early February.  I don't even want to talk about how gross our dishwasher is.  Suffice it to say, the thing was - like our stove- new in 1986, purchased with the house and it is now falling apart - literally. 

I was staring at the stove and thinking about life last night.  See, the stove and dishwasher were purchased with a combination of writing money and the Christmas bonus from my day job. And last night while I stared at it, the little hamster that turns the wheel in my head woke up and commenced running.  When my hamster brain ran hard enough, the light bulb turned on - and I smiled. 

I've always believed that I'd be successful when my fiction writing paid enough to allow me to quit my day job and write full time.  That's still my goal.  I still believe that being a full time author is where I'll be happiest and most fulfilled.  But my stove made me realize that maybe I was committing the same error as our politicans in Congress.  My stove made me realize that compromise doesn't always mean failure - sometimes it's a hallmark of success. 

Like just about everyone everywhere I've had to make a bunch of compromises since the bottom fell out of the economy.  I've had to get to the point where I prioritized bills - the houshold bills first, then my eldest son's college expenses and then everything else.  The everything else means that I pay what I can on everything else and either the companies deal with that or they don't.  And because I grew up in a perienally poor household where I got stuck talking to all those creditors, having a re-run of that era had convinced me that I was a complete failure.  My stove made me realize that wasn't true.

I've reached a point with my day job and my writing where I could get my eldest back to UCF for the Spring Semester of his Junior year and we could replace our ancient stove and dishwasher.  I'm not writing on my fiction full time but I do essentially write full time.  (My day job mainly consists of legal research and writing.) That means that I haven't reached my goal -- but I have progressed on my journey.  

And success isn't measured solely by reaching that one goal.  If I reach it -- when I reach it -- there will be a new goal.  If I don't have goals I have no direction for my life.  So there will always be a goal.  But the goal is only a mile marker - it's not the finish line.  As long as I'm running towards the next marker and making progress, then I'm not a complete failure.  Even if the phone is still ringing and my answering machine is still full of hang up calls, I'm not a complete failure.  I'd only be a complete failure if I failed to try and just threw up my hands. I'd only be a complete failure if I stopped setting goals and heading towards them.

I haven't said "I can't."  I've said, "I haven't gotten there yet."  And I'm still in the race and heading in the right direction.   I've made progress and the next time I doubt that, I'll look at my shiny new stove.  It's a concrete reminder that success isn't a destination - it's a journey.  In our horrendous present economy, many people have been forced to face things they'd rather not, and do things they'd sworn not to.  It would be awfully easy to say - I can't or I won't or I quit.  No matter how tempting it is to throw in the towel, I owe it to myself and my family to continue running along the road, heading for the next mile marker. 

It's important to allow ourselves time to stop and assess when we reach certain plateaus.  The stove might not seem like much to lots of folks, but it means a lot to me.  Success is a very individual thing but certain things about it are common to all of us.  Success is not getting to one place or achieving one thing - it's staying in the race and keeping that towel firmly in hand, ready to wipe sweat from our brows, tears from our eyes --- or sometimes,  just sometimes to wave in a cheer. 

The next time you're in a place where you're thinking of throwing in the towel because you're not where you wanted to be or planned to be, stop and take a look around at where you are.  You may not be at the next mile marker yet, but you're not at the last one either.  Like me, you're on the way. 

Success is a journey.  We may not make the trip the way we planned and we may have to stop and plot a new route.  None of that means we got it wrong.  In fact, all of it means we're getting it right.  Sometimes, along the way, life may throw in an appliance or two. If you look into the stainless steel hard enough, intently enough, your dreams might reflect right back at you.   They're still there - bright and shiny and waiting, just waiting for you to reach out and grab 'em on your way to all your future success. 

See - in the duck lady's house, a Maytag just might turn out to be a crystal ball.

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Today I noticed that Jayne Anne Krentz's new one - "Copper Beach" is now out and about.  I love her work as Krentz and Amanda Quick, though I've never read any of hers as Jayne Castle.  I'd have snapped up her new one in a heart beat except for one not so itty-bitty thing -- the price. 

Ms. Krentz's "Copper Beach" is priced for ebook at $12.99 and the hardcover is $15.26.  That means that Penguin Publishing is selling Ms. Krentz's ebook for only $2.27 less than the hardcover edition.  Holy toadfrogs, Batman.  I adore the author's work, but that price tag is a big ole' stop sign for me.  Even if I had $12.99 to spend for the book - I wouldn't pay that price.  The cost for this ebook doesn't reflect economic reality in today's market given most consumer's budgets and it doesn't reflect how little ebooks cost to produce as compared to paperbacks - let alone hardcover.

In fact, the $12.99 pricetag is so high it feels like gauging.  That I wouldn't put up with even if I had a bank balance bigger than the combined wealth of Bill Gates, Warren Buffett, every Arab Sheik and the entire Walton family.  In the present economic environment, Penguin Publishing's price scale seems far worse than mere greed - it feels evil.

I also think it's quite short sighted of Penguin to set their ebook prices so high.  Consumers have long, long memories.  In my neighborhood there was a hardware store that had been family owned and in business for many years.  Then during Hurricane Hugo the store decided to profit from the aftermath.  It decided to pad its bank balance at the expense of the people who'd kept the place in business for so long.  In the midst of disaster and destruction, the store charged outrageous prices for supplies, generators, batteries and even water. And the victims of the Hurricane got victimized again.  But the area recovered.  People rebuilt and hardware stores all over the area made a great deal of money - but not that store.  You know what happened to that store?  It went out of business and the victims became the victors. 

If Penguin would reduce prices far below what it could reasonably charge the company and its authors would make more money now and would make far, far more when we FINALLY recover from the present economic disaster.  Penguin could sell all its books for $7.99 or less and stamp each one with a note - something like - "We're all in this together and a link for a website."  At the site, the company could state that it had reduced prices to keep books affordable and that prices would increase when things improved.  You know what? The company that did that would find out that the most valuable business commodity is a loyal customer base. 

Ms. Krentz isn't responsible for what her publisher charges.  Sure, she makes money from each sale but the publisher and the vendor make far more than the author who doesn't get to decide the price.  That's a big advantage of being an indie author - all the choices belong to me.  I surely don't have a fan base of even 1/100th of Ms. Krentz's, but based on my experience I can say that the author would actually make a fortune if she got the rights to her back list and self published.  She could charge $3.99 or $4.99 per book and make more than she'd made on that books original advance, all the payouts and all the royalties - far more. 

Penguin's not the only publisher bilking the public, but it's the one I noticed today.  The mindset that allows a company to feel entitled to price an ebook so high is the same mindset that prompted my local hardware store to go for the gold and disregard the hardship being suffered by their devastated and loyal customers. 

Penguin and any company willing to re-victimize the victims of the current economic catastrophe should suffer the same fate as my local hardware store.  But you know what? We actually had to drive farther to pass the gauging  hardware store to go to another business. In an online world, it will be much easier to teach publishers the consequences of corporate greed and an unconscionable lack of empathy. And we won't even have to go out of our way to do it. 

Clicking "next" is easy and perhaps now would be a good time to put that into practice.

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According to Merriam Webster, a trope is "a common or overused theme or device."  I've frequently seen blog posts diss-ing this or that as "a plot trope" or "a romance trope."  In other words, they call something a trope like it's always a bad thing.  Newsflash - I disagree!

So, let's hear it for the tropes!  Let's give the tropes a hand!   There's gold in some of those "overused" plot devices. 

As a previous post mentioned, I'm now the (proud, overjoyed, adoring) owner of a Kindle Fire. So I've been boogling around the Amazon, seeking valuable booty for my value-oriented budget.  Yep, I've been looking for a lot of stuff for a little money.  In this economy - who isn't, right?  Well, while I've been boogling, I've realized how important those tropes can be.  Some of 'em will make me click the "read more" button on the description every time. Others have to be exceptional to hook me.  You know what I realized? 

There are certain tropes that I love in my romances.  No matter how often I read those plots, I'm still apt to check out the next book with a similar plot device that catches my eye.  The types of tropes we treasure may be very similar, or they may be as vast and varied and different as we are as people.  But, I'll bet if you tickle your memory "bone", you'll realize that there are certain tropes that draw you in too.

What does it for me?  My list is too long for me to recall entirely - even on a good day.  But I'll almost always check out the full product description for guardian/ward romances.  I'll do the same for "almost" sibling romances or for those where a fellow falls head over toenails for his best friend's little sister - or even for his daughter's best friend.  I think it's the lure of the forbidden in varying degrees in all of those stories that draws me in, combined in some of 'em with the angst of someone falling for someone who's way, way too young for them - by society's rules anyway. 

Often the tropes will combine, and touches of the "forbidden" added to betrayal will also get me to click more almost as a matter of reflex.  I love stories where one brother falls for another's intended or where the heroine has a mad case of bad, mad love-ust for her big sister or best friend's boyfriend or betrothed.  If a writer sets up the hero as an "honorable beyond reproach" type - then I can't wait to watch him find the lady who teaches him lessons in humanity.  Sometimes these come where the heroine meets a guide taking her to her father, family, big brother or betrothed.  Together they confront a vast, wild terrain that's only partly composed of setting and scenery.

I could go on - and on and on - but you get the point. Likely, you got it earlier, but then, likely you're much brighter than a daft duck lady.  The point is that there are tropes I love - in part- because they are tropes.  "I Love Lucy" features a daffy leading lady I feel "not so strangely" connected to.  In lots of those shows Lucy got into hilarious hot water because of her ongoing desire to be a part of Ricky's show.  Yeah, it was a trope and yeah, it still makes me laugh every time I watch.  It's like "knock knock" jokes - you have some idea where it's going, but you know you'll enjoy the trip anyway. 

I think tropes get a bad rap.  They're the Rodney Dangerfeld of creative concoctions. Tropes just "don't get no respect. No respect, no repect at all ..."   Lord knows, the PCP (PC Police), like to turn up their better-than-thou noses at anything they consider to be - even remotely trope-like.  And yet, if you view life in the right light - with more than a touch of humor - you'll realize that members of the PCP have themselves become - TROPES.  Yes, Virginia, it's true.  Just think about it......

The next time you're about to decide that you're so bright you need stronger shades and you're way, way too smart to be hooked by a trope of any kind, size, shape or description - I've got a point you need to ponder.  One of the biggest reasons people read romance is for the happy ending.  Most people - me, particularly, being amongst that number - consider the "Happy Ending" or HEA to be a feature that defines romance, as in, if it ain't got a HEA it can't be a romance. 

Well, that does make a HEA a common plot device. Since it appears in every book that can claim to be a romance, then it is certainly so well used that if anything's "overused" a HEA must be amongst that number.  So that makes a HEA -- a trope.  

Like I said before - let's hear it for the tropes!!!

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For Christmas this year all I wanted was a Kindle Fire, accessories for it, and an Amazon Prime subscription. 

By special arrangements with my wonderful hubby, I got exactly what I wanted. And you know what? I have no "Christmas regrets."  I don't have even the itty bittiest twinge of buyer's remorse.  In fact, I have the opposite - I'm filled to the brim with buyer's satisfaction.   So naturally, I had to put fingers to keyboard to tell y'all all about it.

I've been privileged to publish on Amazon via their magical, mystical KDP platform for a couple of years now.  Yet, I'm a newcomer to the Amazon customer universe.  I'm confessing that up front because I don't doubt that some of my adoration for the Kindle Fire is actually adoration for the whole Amazon experience.  Getting a Fire gave me the keys to the ereading kingdom. I now have access to the biggest, the baddest, the best ebook variety on Planet Earth.  Pretty much, if there's an ebook in existence, it's gonna be on Amazon and it's gonna be there for the lowest price. In this economy, that's a big plus for the Amazon experience and for the Fire.

Before I got my Fire, I read the flood of criticism that seemed to pour from every which way. They said that the device is faulty because there is only 1 button.  That button turns the Fire on and off and critics claim it causes  many consumers to accidentally turn the device off while they're using it.  Critics also said that the web browser was way, way too slow and that the App Store was vastly underpopulated.  And they cited big problems with the touch screen features that were sometimes unresponsive.

Of all those major problems that the reviewers cited, the only one I've encountered is that sometimes the touch features don't respond.  When that happens, I'll either try again, touch the home key, or touch that much maligned little on-off switch to restart.  Frankly, it doesn't bother me that much but I understand Amazon is working on the issue.  Through recent personal experience with a bad Tablet purchase (not a Fire - an Android for my eldest son) from an Amazon vendor, I've learned that when Amazon gives its word, Amazon keeps its word.  So when the company says it's working on the touch screen issues, I now believe it completely. 

Even if the little touch screen glitches remain, I've found the Fire to be the ultimate entertainment device experience and if y'all don't have a Fire, you need to pick one up right now.  This minute. 

All of the other criticism - about the on/off switch, the slow browser and the insufficient App store - hasn't cropped up as a problem for me at all. I mean, not even once have I had an issue with those features.  The good peeps at Dear Author have some very informative info up about how to change device settings on the Fire so that you can load Apps from other vendors.  I changed the setting, but I haven't left the Amazon once to get anything from anywhere else. 

I've watched a video through the prime service - Gordon Ramsay's Ultimate Christmas.  It was lots of fun and I look forward to boogling through some of the other offerings.  I'm looking forward to revisiting the 1st episode of the 1st season of "Grey's Anatomy" and re-living the time when the Mer/Der magic was new. (Readers of this blog will know that I've been a Grey's Gal since episode 1.) My youngest son will demand some Fire-time to watch the early seasons of "Dr Who," and my hubby will doubtless want to explore some of the Star Trek offerings.  The Amazon Prime video offerings are already numerous and they're growing every day.  I may even pick up some of the first season of "Ellery Queen" - originally I thought it was free for Prime, but alas, I've discovered it's $1.99 per episode.  Still, I'll likely pick up one or two of 'em because that's classic TV in its best, its most intelligent and excellent form. 

I never had a real yen for an iPad and now I'm glad I never got one.  My Kindle Fire is much more portable and it offers something that neither the iPad nor other Android devices can match - the ability to download video to the device.  Yes, America, you can download movies or TV shows onto your Fire and then watch them on a plane, in a train, or on a long road trip in the car.  Funny that the critics never mention that feature now, isn't it?  The ability to download video means the Fire vanquishes Android Tablets and it even kills the mighty iPad.   But the critics couldn't go around saying that now, could they?  Because their goal seems to be to dampen the Fire before it burns so far it gets out of control.

Kindle Fire brings the tablet to a place where nearly everyone can afford it and it dishes out the tablet experience in a way that even a non-techie like me can do more than "get it" - we can own it. 

Nope, the critics didn't kill my Desire for Fire and I'm mighty glad I didn't listen to them.  They were so loud in their howling cries that I suspected they had an agenda.  I suspect it much more now that my personal experience contradicts their claims.  The critics were ranting that Amazon's everyman tablet experience would die beneath the weight of all the device returns to the company after the holidays.  Wonder how that's working out?  I haven't heard a peep from consumers who returned the Fire nor from Amazon, discussing Fire returns.  The critics would like Amazon to go under but it's folks like you and me that will keep the company floating happily along at the head of the pack.

Instead of a product return, I'm giving a product testimonial - and it goes out with a great big "Thank You" to Jeff Bezos and the entire Amazon Kindle Fire team.  Those critics I was talking about before seem like the kind of folks who believe  "You can't get rich by overestimating the intelligence of the American public."  I've never listened to those people - instead, I listen to the public and my readers - or I try to.  And I believe that Amazon is the company Bezos built on the principal that you CAN get rich by catering to the intelligent population of America - and other countries all around the world. 

Trust me on this one, the Kindle Fire is a tablet you can buy knowing you'll love it and understand it because it was created for you by a company that believes you should want more, you should get more and you deserve more.  So Amazon gave you more - it's created a Fire that puts the world at your fingertips.

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I've given "A Faerie Fated Forever" a facelift - at least on Amazon.  The changes will boogle over to B&N and Smashwords eventually, but the new version is bright and shiny and STILL FREE for Kindle.  Why isn't the new version available everywhere right now, you ask?  Because of the technical magic behind the scenes.  I can only work minor magic (tweaks I can make in Word). It takes my hubby, John the Magnificent, to work the high-grade magic Smashwords demands.

Right now, Faerie feeds out FREE to all the bookstores from Smashwords - except Amazon.  And the meat-grinder at SW is not for the faint of heart.  Sometimes even John the Magnificent has to tweak things a couple of times to satisfy the oh-so-exacting SW meat-grinder.  Like all wizards, John the Magnificent stays busy.  When he has time to direct his magic to the SW version of Faerie, we'll get it out there.   

The older "enlarged" version of Faerie also remains in the Forever Series Bundle on Amazon and elsewhere.  I may leave the enlarged version in the bundle.  It gives an incentive to buy the bundle because then it'll be the only place to read the full, original version.  (Inside every author building a platform marketing genes must grow - otherwise, the author's career won't grow either.) 

The edit to Faerie started with an email from the KDP maestros.  They said a customer had complained of spelling errors in the book and asked me to check it out.  The maestros didn't remove the book or do anything a'tall heavy-handed. They simply made a request.  The huge, hideous error pointed out in the email was that once (and it was only once) I used the word brown when it should have read brow.  Okay, that was snarky, wasn't it?  I have a little snark inside but I try never to feed it! Anyway, none of the spelling errors was major and in the original 100,000 word plus version I only found about 3 or 4 ( brown for brow, losses for looses, a missing e, and blond for blonde).  All were minor, but all are now fixed. 

The spelling "errors" were smaller than many I've run across in books published by the big houses, but that's no excuse really.  And my snarkiness is like a porcupine's quills - a defense mechanism.  Truthfully, if an error bothered a reader, then it should be fixed.  And it was.  But that's where the journey started.  While I was listening to readers, I recalled some of the book's reviews that complained it was too long.  So I turned a sharp eye to editing for length.

Some of my favorite events are missing from the new version, but they were things that kept Heather and Neil in England for a while after their reunion.  I loved those events because they confirmed that Neil and Heather loved each other.  But a goodly number of readers wanted the story to pace a little faster and now it does.  But it's not just the plot edits that pace the tale faster because I also edited for word choice.  I tightened the language and kicked more adverbs to the curb than I thought I knew.  But it turned out - when I wrote Faerie, I had a near Guiness Record setting mass of "adverbial knowledge."  I didn't just know the adverbs- I loved them in a deep and meaningless way. 

Yes, Virginia, you guessed the next part - I sprinkled a generous helping of my adverbial prowess in Faerie.  But undoubtedly, assuredly and categorically, I guarantee that the remaining adverbs are nearly absolutely necessary. 

Now that Faerie's had a facelift, I'd appreciate all y'all checking her out, especially if you read or reviewed the prior version.  It's my understanding that if you email Amazon, they'll let you download the new one even though the older version is still in your library.  Since Faerie is free, you have nothing to lose by checking out the new model.  If you like the story, you might pick up the Forever Series Bundle which will let you compare and contrast the new lean mean tale with the original gauzy, gaudy fuller version.  The Bundle is only $5.99 on Amazon.

Like I said, right now the trim, toned version of Faerie is an Amazon exclusive. Pick it up free for your Kindle or Kindle Fire (Or Kindle for PC - available as a free download from Amazon).  And be sure to quack back and let me know what you think because the changes to the story were made based on reader reviews and feedback.  See, I love y'all.  I really, really love y'all.  And just like any red-blooded romance heroine, I want y'all to love me back.